|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 03/03/15 at 01:01 PM|
|Posted by Laura Doom on 03/03/15 at 11:30 PM|
I know this 'strategic withdrawal', a parallel cyclical scenario that strikes like a power outage. I like your selective dissection for illustration here.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/04/15 at 03:44 PM|
"playing host and guest
to only myself" - a clever gathering of one here, Chris. I know this feeling well and I'm not even from a big city. Loved these lines also -"the moon of introversion
eclipses the extravert sun". Nicely done.
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/04/15 at 07:14 PM|
You express a universal here I believe. Perhaps most have both an introverted and extroverted element to our personalities. When one far dominates it is good to do some introspection. Bring some balance. Great writing.
|Posted by Ken Harnisch on 03/06/15 at 09:38 PM|
Having folded my insights into a small cardboard box many times and retreated from the world - albeit briefly - I can so relate to this gem, Chris!