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In the Dawn Of A New Season

by June Labyzon

In the dawn of a new season
beauty fails to fall
setting pale the sun
I adapt to the change
it is different than settling
the switch won't be a forever
one.

In the dawn of a new season
the power lies in simplicity
a simple splash gone in a moment
perhaps a little less cozy
than the one before.

In the dawn of a new season
I walk in the sunlight
looking for spiritual challenges
preparing for the blue soul nights
when the silence is louder than the voices;
in my head.

In the dawn of a new season,
I blow out the candles
weaving a rhapsody
of small hissing rhythms;
the large dark emptiness
cold against my hips.

In the dawn of a new season
I spin around and around
to face my heart
it disappears with each turn
playing peek-a-boo
with my eyes.

10/20/2014

Author's Note: I had trouble with a title here, any suggestions would be appreciated. I am not happy with the title.

Posted on 10/21/2014
Copyright © 2024 June Labyzon

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/21/14 at 05:04 AM

I like it just the way it is...beautiful, and great use of repetition. The whole thing works well for me.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/14/14 at 03:35 PM

I echo Chris. This is lovely the way it is June, all the way through. I am quite taken with the first stanza which appeals to all the offbeat and magically rhythmic senses in me.

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