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After Comprehension

by Linda Fuller

I want to stand beneath you
catch and absorb
the detritus you drop
from your mind and heart
pile it up
let it heat and steam
so I may composthend you

09/26/2014

Posted on 09/26/2014
Copyright © 2024 Linda Fuller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Paul Lastovica on 09/26/14 at 11:19 PM

thoughts upon being buried alive... a student to the very end!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/27/14 at 01:20 AM

Nice one Linda. Had to look up the word 'detritus.' Glad I did, and well applicable to the inspiration,,,message here. I like the other surprise word here too: composthend. It's fun to create new words. Kudos!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/29/14 at 04:46 PM

What could be a deeper method of understanding than this elemental deconstruct. Very nicely done!

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