If we are
by Matthew Zangen
If we are,
we were made
breaking upon morals.
speaking for each other
sorry for our making,
thankful, and mistaken.
Posted on 09/23/2014
Copyright © 2020 Matthew Zangen
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Paul Lastovica on 09/26/14 at 12:02 AM|
we are a confused mess of certainty.
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/29/14 at 11:58 AM|
I love how you've stitched it all together, this certainty/uncertainty, this all ado about nothing/everything, o'er which we fuss incessantly. Congratulations on POTD.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/29/14 at 03:49 PM|
Congrats on POTD! Loved the phrase "definitely finite", that first word "if" and that last word "mistaken". So many carefully chosen words in this. Thanks!
|Posted by Leonard M Hawkes on 12/17/14 at 03:18 AM|
Yes, desperate, thankful and still very much mistaken--therefore poetry?