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Surfeit of Abstractions

by Laura Doom

We are stateless
reduced to statement and statistic
denied the luxury of speaking
figuratively.

We are homeless
displaced by uninvested guests
inviting us to leave
by courtesy of their addresses.

We are nameless
though not yet spared
the generous pronouncements
of sophomoric strategists.

We are hopeless
subjected to objectives set
by virtue of secular predators
citing statutory hate.

We are abstract
in extremis
living proof
that there is life after death.

09/13/2014

Posted on 09/13/2014
Copyright © 2024 Laura Doom

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/13/14 at 06:59 PM

Interesting combination of the influence of current events in the middles eastdisplaced by (uninvested guests inviting us to leave by courtesy of their addresses.) , and the idea damaged good spoken about in one of my own recent poem (living proof that there is life after death).

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/13/14 at 07:00 PM

Oops...corrected...Interesting combination of the influence of current events in the middle east (displaced by uninvested guests inviting us to leave by courtesy of their addresses.), and the idea of damaged good spoken about in one of my recent poem (living proof that there is life after death).

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/13/14 at 10:57 PM

From a human standpoint the poem addresses the disparate condition of mankind which appears always to divide. I choose to Hope! Thought challenging poem.

Posted by Paul Lastovica on 09/14/14 at 03:53 AM

All opposition thwarted. All barriers overcome. All in due time; and the time due can not be known - should not be known - Mysteries level the battlefield. Maybe we died long ago and refuse to believe we've gone on. Maybe.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/14/14 at 09:15 PM

A lot of grim runs through this, all of it making me consider the human brain and its focus and obsessions, particularly those (news pundits and politicians come to mind) who seem to worship at the feet of self predicted disasters. That last line is pretty haunting as one considers what steps/abstractions we might come up with next. Oh, you do make me think....

Posted by Jim Benz on 09/15/14 at 06:10 PM

I like your use of "sophomoric" here, the way it links (or seems to link) back to its etymological roots, and then twists its way into a more modern double meaning. Though, in this case, all meanings seem to have been rendered abstract, moot, unchallengeable, at least for us plebes caught in this sticky web of, figuratively speaking, statistical morphometrics. But not the case for those who shape these meanings from their own duplicitous motives? Is there a "them" there?

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 09/16/14 at 01:51 PM

Laura, you never fail to deliver! *****STELLAR*****

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