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Persistence unwound

by Laura Doom

My Dali clock works like a dream.
At the moment this was written
it read 42 degrees and 54 seconds.
Time dances by night, sleeps by day
frequently tripping
never falling or rising.
Its face is a series of tics in detox
powered by personality meltdown
and lapses in memory.
The battery holds
an unleaded banana
peeled by lips of its tongue.
At some point in the future
it wrote a poem
which, pending execution
I hung on a cloud.

08/29/2014

Posted on 08/29/2014
Copyright © 2024 Laura Doom

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rob Littler on 08/29/14 at 04:18 PM

How this sounds makes it so much more that what it says, if you know what I mean, and I think you do.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/29/14 at 04:48 PM

Weird and wonderful, a poem to match Dali's creativity.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/30/14 at 01:42 PM

Excellent multimedia piece, Laura. I've always been a big fan of Dali's work. Your poem aptly plays him compliment in its surrealness.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/30/14 at 09:19 PM

Ooooh, I missed the photo and background the first time around. Nicely done.

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 08/31/14 at 04:56 PM

*****surrealistically super nova***** (: :)

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