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10 hours ocean waves with sun, sand, rich blue sky
by Gail Wolper10 hours ocean waves with sun, sand, rich blue sky
if it takes all this
to fall asleep
maybe it ain't
gonna happen
08/05/2014 Author's Note: you tube
Posted on 08/05/2014
Copyright © 2024 Gail Wolper
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/05/14 at 01:45 PM I love the way this turns at the end. not happening ain't such a bad thing, sometimes. sometimes it is not pleasing sights and sounds which lull us to slumber, but sights and sounds we harbor quite deeper in our souls, more profoundly pleasing, than any that could ever exist outside ourselves which we have somehow forgotten how to access. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/05/14 at 10:05 PM I like how this starts off Gail. Wasn't sure I understood the last two lines, but Phil's interpretation clarified that for me. :) |
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