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winter spirit

by Peter Humphreys

it is cold
still wicked cold
at times when
the Russian winds
control
nay embrace us

I sit watching
the days go bye

under the trees
many broken and bowed
snowdrops bloom
daffodil move
in rows
back and around
not Wordworth's
gentle rhythm
but raggedly

I notice a man
my age perhaps
whatever that is
a face
as silver as birch
as if
but one of them

we exchange pleasantries

in no time
he slips
back into the forest
invisible
gone

I wonder
about it all
whether William
and Dorothy
were lovers
not in modern terms
of course
but as sitting here
they cherished life
before Spring fell
to worldly Summer

03/25/2014

Posted on 03/25/2014
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/25/14 at 11:46 PM

You hit the mark on this winter with a bit of political commentary thrown in. Scene after scene moves us to spring. Yes, moving us to summer. Will there really be any spring?

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/26/14 at 02:59 PM

I loved "a face as silver as birch" and the glimpse of this man for just a moment. I like the idea of winter being a time of stillness, thoughtfulness and spring being a time to enjoy for its youthful innocence. Lovely, as always, Peter.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/28/14 at 12:49 AM

Hi Peter. Wonderful poem; great mixture of season and supernatural. I see you're in Dublin. My mother's side (Donnelly) is from Ulster, and I have relatives in Derry. Might be visiting them in 2015. Cheers!

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