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Three Lines
by Sam RobertsJittery geography body, that I bask in fire feelings STOP
"Feelings are deceitful" you said,
and so you carry on. 02/26/2014
Posted on 02/26/2014
Copyright © 2024 Sam Roberts
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/26/14 at 09:22 PM My condolences, Sam. As someone who believes everything happens for a reason, and that there are no coincidences, perhaps it's better to find out now, than later when you've invested more of everything into the relationship. ((HUGS)) |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/26/14 at 10:09 PM I've heard some people say it's none of their business what other people think of them, but boy, it can sure hurt if you stumble across those opinions. I liked the "jittery geography body" phrase in this. That's quite visual. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/27/14 at 10:04 PM Gut feelings. Broken relationships always bring pain. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 03/02/14 at 09:10 PM very strongly written. makes me glad i only have "alice n wonderland, thru the looking glass" relationship issues. |
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