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Be Free

by Tota Longmire

In my own way and in my own time
I have come to realize I am just fine.
“I am Me!” I want to scream from rooftops
And at the pinnacle of mountains’ drops.
I am not damaged nor broken nor wrong
Scarred perhaps but that just adds to my song.
I am different, but so is everyone else.
None of us are the same despite society’s tells.

Be like me.
Look in the mirror and not want to change what you see.
Then you will truly be free.
Stop listening to society.

Actually, don’t be like me.
Be like you.

01/13/2014

Posted on 01/13/2014
Copyright © 2024 Tota Longmire

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/13/14 at 01:49 PM

Much truth and wisdom here. Well stated rant against that all too prevalent herd mentality.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/13/14 at 02:11 PM

this lovely ode rings truer than anything advice Ann Landers could ever dispense from her typewriter.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/13/14 at 02:41 PM

Clear message clearly stated. The real freedom I have found is being in Christ. Part of that is accepting the fact that God loves me.

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 01/13/14 at 06:36 PM

*Stellar* Love that last line! :)

Posted by Uriel Tovar on 08/25/16 at 12:05 AM

what an anthem!

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