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Dutch Courage

by Monique Louw

I toss the match
over my shoulder
and watch the world

burn

and I walk away
braver and bolder

and wonder
if I'm burning

something

Important.

11/26/2013

Posted on 11/26/2013
Copyright © 2025 Monique Louw

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/27/13 at 02:04 PM

Wow! Short, but so much impact. The closing question adds a whole new meaning to "starting over again." Braver and bolder show great confidence also.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/04/13 at 03:23 AM

This pulls me in different directions and I like that a lot. I also like the toss and just walking away, punctuated by that bit of doubt.

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