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hippie haiku

by Maria Francesca

this is my haiku.
one line, seven syllables,
two lines have just five.

I'm pretty certain
it should focus on nature
so: rain, wind, river.

I've counted them up
the syllables are correct -
I'm a damned genius!

let's see: what else, now?
some other hippie garbage:
love, peace, harmony

blah, blah, blah, blah, blah
inspiration, patchouli
unshaved underarms.

I've wasted my time.
you've wasted yours reading it.
but it's my haiku.

11/13/2013

Posted on 11/13/2013
Copyright © 2024 Maria Francesca

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/13/13 at 03:46 PM

"unshaved underarms"- hilarious piece. Thanks.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/13/13 at 03:59 PM

LOL! Syllables put to entertainingly good use, Maria!!

Posted by H.M Stevens on 11/20/13 at 06:21 AM

I really love this.

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