| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Uriel Tovar on 09/14/13 at 05:04 PM i enjoyed this scene.
really tied neatly together. thanks for this. |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 09/14/13 at 05:11 PM Achingly beautiful poem, filled with longing. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 09/14/13 at 08:46 PM I can truly appreciate this. Wade and I went to the Grand Canyon for the first time last early November.We spent 2 days and nights in the canyon at Phantom Ranch.We camped under the stars without a tent at Indian Gardens as we ascended back up on the Angel Bright. We are going back to the west coast in Oct. and plan to go back to the canyon as well if the weather is good like it was last year.This time my brother is coming along too.
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| Posted by George Hoerner on 09/15/13 at 02:53 AM Wonderful m'lady! As usual, it takes me places I have not been for some time. Thanks! |
| Posted by Shannon McEwen on 09/15/13 at 07:04 PM love the vivid imagery this provokes for me, and even that ache in my chest when I finish reading it. well done |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 09/15/13 at 08:48 PM I forgot to add that it also blends the sad ambiguity of a personal loss of someone close with the natural beauty experienced and very well done.
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/16/13 at 03:26 PM I like how this poem demonstrates how we all deal with loss and grieving in our own unique way, and as a result each related poem different, and yet still able to touch others...us all spiritually, having gone through our own similar but unique experiences. |
