| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Sarah Wolf on 07/15/13 at 01:10 PM Very nice and welcome :) |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/16/13 at 10:15 AM beautiful from start to finish. welcome to Pathetic. |
| Posted by Kevin Fehlen on 08/10/13 at 02:29 PM Congrats on the PotD. Delightful poem. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 08/10/13 at 06:29 PM Certainly a poem worthy of POTD! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/22/14 at 01:53 PM I missed this as POTD, but glad I finally caught up with it. Congrats. Heart warming positive message here. I especially like the imagery and message in that second stanza. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 02/02/14 at 01:32 PM I enjoy the way you manipulate language here away from categorisation and towards expression... |
