Critic (version 2) by Clara Mae GregoryIn Fauve fashion
masking for Life,
fallible textuaries
pervade hallways,
vaulting their faults
inside libraries
where words grow old
with merde mold
in a realm beyond Belief.
06/08/2013 Posted on 06/08/2013 Copyright © 2025 Clara Mae Gregory
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Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/08/13 at 09:35 PM Although I'll have to look up "merde mold", I love this for its playfulness and intellect. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/13/13 at 07:35 PM This evokes some cool imaging placed in the fauve world. The whole "fallible textuaries" is a pretty classy term. Read and consider carefully might be the message here. This has a pleasing flow, solid phrasing, subtle text. Thanks for this. |
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