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Critic (version 2)

by Clara Mae Gregory

In Fauve fashion

masking for Life,

fallible textuaries

pervade hallways,

vaulting their faults

inside libraries

where words grow old

with merde mold

in a realm beyond Belief.

06/08/2013

Posted on 06/08/2013
Copyright © 2024 Clara Mae Gregory

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/08/13 at 09:35 PM

Although I'll have to look up "merde mold", I love this for its playfulness and intellect.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/13/13 at 07:35 PM

This evokes some cool imaging placed in the fauve world. The whole "fallible textuaries" is a pretty classy term. Read and consider carefully might be the message here. This has a pleasing flow, solid phrasing, subtle text. Thanks for this.

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