Anodyne by Anita MacWhispering keystrokes
to each other,
they sit cross-legged
on their beds
playing virtual games of
Never Have I Ever.
03/22/2013 Posted on 03/22/2013 Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Paul Lastovica on 03/22/13 at 07:11 PM making the case for "the more things change, the more they stay the same"... |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/24/13 at 06:51 AM Love the brevity of this piece, and yet how it speaks volumes. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/25/13 at 01:49 PM I liked the very intimate feeling this gives me. |
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 03/25/13 at 03:41 PM even over waves and wires the game stays the same. |
Posted by Laura Doom on 03/28/13 at 06:48 PM I've often wondered if two-way traffic is all in the mind... |
Posted by George Hoerner on 03/30/13 at 07:08 PM Oh, never have i is that not the game the whole world plays and nobody wins but those who have. Really great write and how much is packed into four short lines. |
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