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Anodyne

by Anita Mac

Whispering keystrokes
to each other,
they sit cross-legged
on their beds
playing virtual games of
Never Have I Ever.

03/22/2013

Posted on 03/22/2013
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Paul Lastovica on 03/22/13 at 07:11 PM

making the case for "the more things change, the more they stay the same"...

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/24/13 at 06:51 AM

Love the brevity of this piece, and yet how it speaks volumes.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/25/13 at 01:49 PM

I liked the very intimate feeling this gives me.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 03/25/13 at 03:41 PM

even over waves and wires the game stays the same.

Posted by Laura Doom on 03/28/13 at 06:48 PM

I've often wondered if two-way traffic is all in the mind...

Posted by George Hoerner on 03/30/13 at 07:08 PM

Oh, never have i is that not the game the whole world plays and nobody wins but those who have. Really great write and how much is packed into four short lines.

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