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I Saw Five Ships Come Sailing In

by Kristina Woodhill

Four river tugboats and an old barge
Floated in through the heavy door to the urologist office

Laughter and light waves surged before,
O2 tanks in tow for the old barge and tugboat mate

Generous tire fenders in place,
The other three bobbing gently, fore and aft,
Their voices uplifting on the same sea breeze

I, harbor tugboat in waiting,
Had docked earlier this becalmed morning
As far
As possible
From the seagull-shrill
Receptionist station

My barge and his mate
Deep in the bowels of this
Whale of a good time

Small fleet of five docked and anchored
Pages of blank forms filled
Tank tubing and weak yardarms
Secured

Their good-humored,
Waiting moments
Transformed
The flagging level of that small pond

Barnacles in full view
Roughly scraped decks unashamed
Their spirits seemed to float
Above surrounding superfluous nonsense

Doctors and needles, catheters and what-comes-next
They knew their crew would pull together

And to my wonderment
When Nurse Squiddy-eyes

Called out,
“Barge!”

As one, these five
Sailed off
Down narrow Red Sea hallway

Expanding without hesitation
Into one vast ocean of love

And I remained,
Bouyed

12/13/2012

Posted on 12/13/2012
Copyright © 2025 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 12/14/12 at 01:01 PM

What a metaphor!...best i've seen here in a while, Kristina, and so uplifting, despite the subject matter. Way to go, lady!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/17/12 at 01:19 PM

Maybe I'm mistaken, but I recall your telling me about your elderly parents and their oxygen tanks. I agree with Ken, turing something concrete into a nuatical metaphor is brilliant.

Posted by Jody Pratt on 01/27/13 at 04:29 PM

Oh buoy do I love those last two lines!

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