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I Have
by Gail Wolper
Saturday, November 24, 2012
I have climbed the mountain
I have gone insane
look under the rock and you will find the answer
look under the rock and you will find said question.
The one who sits on the landfill is rich
The one who appears insane is a wise man
I have already climbed that mountain
I have already gone insane.
11/28/2012 Posted on 11/28/2012
Copyright © 2024 Gail Wolper
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 11/28/12 at 09:16 PM Isn't that when the real journey begins? I like the simplicity of this and your effective use of repetition as you delve into the landfill. Very nice. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/29/12 at 12:06 AM ...gail, love the style in toto, what jim mentioned. i like your writing guile in this one. as in Cloak. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 11/29/12 at 12:27 AM Anyone who is not insane today is not alive. Or if they are they most have no way of seeing, hearing, or feeling what goes on in this world. Welcome to Pathetic and nice write. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/08/12 at 05:21 PM I like how this loops back, the pairs of lines, the simplicity. Thanks for this. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/27/13 at 09:46 PM anyone who has ever had a notion in their heads, which varied slightly from the herd has been thought and labeled insane by the herdsmen and given exclusive rights to usage of the rubber room as reward for such a creative act as thinks to go its own way and not necessarily the road least traveled, but most certainly a road which is ours to pave in whatever method or direction or fashion our creativity dictates. |
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