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Skydancers

by Carolyn Coville

Brilliant, white daggers
shimmering through the night sky
lighting up heaven

08/24/2003

Author's Note: Repost

Posted on 10/24/2012
Copyright © 2025 Carolyn Coville

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christel Crews on 10/25/12 at 04:02 AM

this is truly lovely! what a beautiful picture you have illustrated!

Posted by Johnny Crimson on 10/25/12 at 04:11 PM

"(lighting up heaven), begging for the faint to dream with their eyelids removed."

Posted by Bertram Sparagmos on 10/25/12 at 08:04 PM

Yes, daggers indeed. Well done.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/27/12 at 05:41 PM

The "white daggers" sends my mind in all kinds of directions. This is vividly visual and I do like that title. Thanks!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/27/12 at 10:23 PM

Adds a whole new meaning with the daggers to "aurora borealis." Excellent visual poem Carolyn.

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