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Final Act

by Kristina Woodhill

First light
Flames flicker deep in the garden

Figures pull hose, loose sentinel
Faucet primed

Felines high tail for cover
Fence line secured and soaked

Fare thee well, old hawthorn
Fond adieu, overgrown apache plume

Fed slowly, stick by branch
Fork pitches, unsettling piles

Former giant miscanthus canes
Folded and snapped

Fierce crackling, hungry bites,
Fiery red deconstructs

Fuel crumbles
Fingers sift cold soft ash

Fall

10/14/2012

Posted on 10/14/2012
Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 10/25/12 at 02:14 PM

For the love of Fall ~ I was so caught up in this that I hadn't realized (until the "Fall") all the flow beginning with F and I must say this is the story of my front and back yard, as if you took pen and paper to my porch and documented it.

Posted by Julie Adams on 12/16/12 at 01:08 AM

what a beautiful capture of the changing season, love "fiery red deconstructs" and ending on the cold soft ash is a perfect transition to the ensuing winter! A pleasure to behold ur poetry again, peace n poems, jewels xo

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/27/12 at 01:09 PM

your language is as beautiful and rapt as ever and garlanding the heart of the matter as always.

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