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Remez and Derash

by A. Paige White



She’s been thinking about things that don’t need thinking
" Fokker-Planck" , all those obvious signs of interlinking
My bed is a planet, an orbital plumb
There’s more to two digits than to sum
Cheers! Here’s to inking, rethinking, and winking.

" Chum."

10/14/2012

Author's Note: My attempt at Robert Lee Brewer's Poetic Asides Blog for this week. I used two of his suggested lines in it.

Posted on 10/14/2012
Copyright © 2021 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/03/12 at 07:31 PM

Although I'm not familiar with Brewer's work, I like how this communicates, especially to me.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 11/04/12 at 04:27 PM

*My bed is a planet* blows my mind, adore it!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/05/12 at 02:24 PM

Clever morning glory, how can one open this poem without laughing with and at oneself.

Posted by Sam Roberts on 03/03/14 at 12:21 AM

I absolutely dig this poem! Visually on the page it is great and the words flow fantastically. I can't stop reading it! Thanks!

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 03/05/14 at 01:47 PM

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