Remez and Derash
by A. Paige White
She’s been thinking about things that don’t need thinking
" Fokker-Planck" , all those obvious signs of interlinking
My bed is a planet, an orbital plumb
There’s more to two digits than to sum
Cheers! Here’s to inking, rethinking, and winking.
Author's Note: My attempt at Robert Lee Brewer's Poetic Asides Blog for this week. I used two of his suggested lines in it.
Posted on 10/14/2012
Copyright © 2021 A. Paige White
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/03/12 at 07:31 PM|
Although I'm not familiar with Brewer's work, I like how this communicates, especially to me.
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 11/04/12 at 04:27 PM|
*My bed is a planet>* blows my mind, adore it!
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/05/12 at 02:24 PM|
Clever morning glory, how can one open this poem without laughing with and at oneself.
|Posted by Sam Roberts on 03/03/14 at 12:21 AM|
I absolutely dig this poem! Visually on the page it is great and the words flow fantastically. I can't stop reading it! Thanks!
|Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 03/05/14 at 01:47 PM|