| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/15/12 at 07:35 PM The term "peace and quiet" can be rubbish, and the quiet some anti-peace. Good one. Thanks |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/16/12 at 01:57 AM Nicely done. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/16/12 at 03:00 PM Very well put. A highly spiritual piece that I'm sure we all can relate to in our own way. I sure can. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/18/12 at 10:32 AM ... excellent..... |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 09/21/12 at 02:23 PM Simple, elegant and searing..one of your best Joan! "But I feel/like a broken transmission/
I cannot switch gears/
I’m stuck and I can’t go anywhere"
i was there. It is exactaly as you wrote.
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| Posted by Bertram Sparagmos on 09/21/12 at 03:40 PM I can definitely feel the emotions coming out of this piece, and I can readily identify. I like it. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/22/12 at 04:34 AM Congratulations on hitting Number 1, Joan. Well deserved!! :) |
