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Angels are Everywhere
by Kerowyn RoseThere she was...
mesmerized
by a kaleidoscope
of colors;
brain-looping
‘round a
hula-hoop of
dreams,
when an angel,
with singed feathers
pulled her from her knees,
wide eyed &
heaven bent on
resetting her
on the path to
a destiny she didn’t
feel strong enough to face.
“Why are you here?”
Her annoyance not
nearly concealed.
“You keep getting lost.”
He replied, then
rubbed her arms
& walked with her
until she found
confidence of her own
to wake up & go on living.
07/31/2012 Posted on 07/31/2012
Copyright © 2024 Kerowyn Rose
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 08/01/12 at 05:37 AM This I like very much...while the "encounter" is grand, I get the sense that this person while yet lost, was the type worth saving. And that's comforting. Nice. Thank you. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 08/01/12 at 11:55 PM I think it's only human to be sidetracked by the kaleidoscope colors every now and again. Our angels signed up to correct our ADD tendencies. Oooooh, shiny object...*toddles off* :)))
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| Posted by Johnny Crimson on 08/02/12 at 01:45 PM cool |
| Posted by Keith D Allison on 08/02/12 at 11:32 PM Nice enjoyed this |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 08/03/12 at 10:40 PM Inspirational and quiet...love the lyricism of this! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/04/12 at 04:46 AM Nice work Kerowyn. My belief too. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/05/12 at 03:23 AM Really a fine flow to this piece. I especially like the "singed feathers" and how this phrasing is put together - "brain-looping
‘round a
hula-hoop of
dreams,". Thank you! |
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