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my sun

by George Hoerner

like the sun
you came into my life
warm - delicate
you float
in my mind
moving slowly around
touching every corner
gently bringing life
always answering yes
to life to love
yes, yes you say
an undenying woman yes
yes world - yes life
yes woman yes man
yes love
ahead into life taking
with us
all who care to come

11/12/1978

Posted on 07/02/2012
Copyright © 2025 George Hoerner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/02/12 at 10:35 PM

A beautiful mediation on the future. Awesome.

Posted by Laurie Blum on 07/03/12 at 12:52 PM

Ooooh...if only a man would write these words to me. Sigh, so lovely.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/04/12 at 06:56 PM

Something dynamite in your writing lately, George. A pleasure to read this.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/13/12 at 12:11 PM

I like this very much George for its simplicity and yet powerful emotion. A truly poignant read to start the day.

Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 07/14/12 at 11:44 PM

Lovely! I always thought yes was the best word we have, especially dealing with loved ones. Awesome!

Posted by Gail Wolper on 01/25/13 at 04:24 AM

Makes me want to lean back and do something I never do. Relax!

Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 01/29/13 at 01:53 AM

voluptuously gorgeous, is how this strikes me.

Posted by LK Barrett on 02/01/13 at 06:09 PM

...the question is always joy, the answer...well, you know the answer...lk

Posted by Paul Lastovica on 02/03/13 at 08:15 PM

I find it difficult to refuse My Sun as well. Yes is the word, and the word is Yes; always.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/06/13 at 04:33 PM

Beautiful....never let her go.

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