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you don't know jack

by Elizabeth Jill




04/20/2012

Posted on 04/20/2012
Copyright © 2026 Elizabeth Jill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/21/12 at 01:12 PM

It suffices that I know Jilly, and JACK CAN GO TO? which would be a redundant trip as he, if Jack is a he, is already there and always in the same spot, never moves away from there, for Jack is a fixed and dying star, unlike the ever blazing comet which Jilly you are as this ode clearly illustrates and so full of all the philosophical beams that I crave and which sustain the birds, even the bees in me. this ode, this ode is to die for, but mostly it is to live for and what does Jack know about living? nada, lest Jilly blew a breath in him, if Jack is a him, then Jack would know, would certainly know, what a blessing it is to know, Jilly and her song(s) for the living.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/21/12 at 01:29 PM

Thought provoking piece, Jill. Love the choice of vocabulary and construction. Kudos to you and Jack!

Posted by Ava Blu on 06/03/12 at 07:06 PM

i know jack very well; i wish i didn't

Posted by Johnny Crimson on 07/13/12 at 12:19 AM

Excellent ...I enjoyed the delivery as well as the poem.

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