| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/09/12 at 08:43 PM Worthy reminder (with the help of Sigmund) that we are all masters of our own reality. As for missing something, my suggestion is put it away for a while...give it time. The next time you pull it out, you'll be surprised at how your perception of the inspiration and resulting expression (words) has changed. Always works for me. :o) |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 04/09/12 at 09:01 PM Dear old Sig is no longer around and many suggest he was only right about a few things, important as they were. If I had no one to bother I'd be reading a heck of a lot of poetry and even at times trying to write it. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/09/12 at 10:39 PM I'm not sure. I honestly really liked the whole thing. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/11/12 at 01:22 AM That last stanza seems to be a call to action which, to me, is a good thing. |
