I do not count the syllables in my haiku's; I simply wing it. Alternatively... I do not count the feathers when I try to fly; I simply wing it.
02/24/2012
Very nice! I like them both.
It sounds good to me. I always stop counting after 1, 2, 3,...! It just gets too hard. By the way do you know that there are exactlly the same number of points on 4 inch line as there are on a 10 inch line?
This becomes so much more to think about with the two alternatives presented. Thanks, Jody!
Ha! Touché old man!! You and I are birds of a feather when it come to haiku and flight.
