| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 02/25/12 at 01:53 AM Very nice! I like them both. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 02/25/12 at 02:41 AM It sounds good to me. I always stop counting after 1, 2, 3,...! It just gets too hard. By the way do you know that there are exactlly the same number of points on 4 inch line as there are on a 10 inch line? |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/25/12 at 09:01 PM This becomes so much more to think about with the two alternatives presented. Thanks, Jody! |
| Posted by Shannon McEwen on 02/25/12 at 09:55 PM At first read I liked the first version, then the second grew on me until I couldnt decide, love seeing alternatives!
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/26/12 at 10:50 PM Ha! Touché old man!! You and I are birds of a feather when it come to haiku and flight. |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 02/28/12 at 07:16 AM Like 'em both!!! (-: MFS |
