Finale by Jody PrattUpon a breath a murmur;
a still too still chest,
that fails to rise except
to burst the lung in thoughts unrest.
A pair of eyes fold aside;
upon the pillow rest,
and fail to see the light
which darkens lips and pales zest.
Voices lie not far from ears
that close the world
to recite the years;
to hear the mind remember prayers.
This hand that swung the hammer,
that threw the fist upon the air;
fails to rise to say goodbye
and peaceful, waits to disappear.
This hand that swore to tell the truth
so God would hold it true,
once upon His book so confident,
now soaked a desperate blue.
This heart that ran a marathon
for love and life and love,
for love and life and things above,
this heart that begs for air.
This heart which swore itself to itself
and held its virtue true;
that lived to the fullest
up to this gloomy fortitude.
A back which once held the weight
now weighs upon the bed;
a chest lays its weight upon it
heavy as the dead.
A final murmur never breaks the cheek;
a tongue unmoved
a chest too still
a man who knows defeat.
Those who stood beside
leaking from their eyes
now wonder why and beg God
not to take the life.
Never understanding what Might
may lay beyond prayers and pain.
Bury the dead, they say,
and take count of years remain. 02/23/2012 Author's Note: God will humble every man in the end.
Posted on 02/24/2012 Copyright © 2024 Jody Pratt
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by George Hoerner on 02/24/12 at 07:44 PM This is a great tribute to someone's death to my mind Jody. I'm not so sure I've seen one finer. |
Posted by Shannon McEwen on 02/25/12 at 10:08 PM beautifully done. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/26/12 at 10:58 PM Has a brilliantly archaic yet universal spiritually meaningful feel to it. A timeless piece, as I eluded to in my PM back to your comment. |
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