Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/23/12 at 07:59 PM ... excellent..... |
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/23/12 at 10:09 PM Bravo! mine's kinda threadbare itself, now that I look at it...excellent "weave" here, Vivienne! |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/24/12 at 10:33 PM I love reading your poems. They feel immensely real to me. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/25/12 at 08:51 PM This flows fast and fun. The squashed-flat laugh bubbles is a great image. I really like the idea of a seamstress making something of the "me-suit". Thanks for this! |
Posted by Shannon McEwen on 02/25/12 at 10:13 PM this made me smile and grimace at the same time at my "me suit", but it's those "imperfections" that makes us who we are:P |
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 02/27/12 at 12:11 AM let me know if you find that me-suit solution. sounds like we could all use a soak. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/02/12 at 05:44 PM A clever thought provoking concept well expressed! |