|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Dawn Davidson on 01/30/12 at 12:24 PM|
i am aboard on this...where next; great write
|Posted by Lori Blair on 01/31/12 at 09:19 PM|
I most agree with you..and have been wide awake for some time now! Excellent write George!
|Posted by Jody Pratt on 02/24/12 at 08:11 PM|
Poets are poets because their eyes are open to reality. Without closed eyes in the world we may not know how lucky we are. That is to say, without darkness we can not confirm the light.
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/22/12 at 01:30 PM|
that last stanza says it all George and hits us where we live or used to live in the world of naivete, before something shook us awake. alas when the world wakes, some by sheer necessity must remain asleep as if to balance it all. I cannot imagine a world, fully awake. I think a world in such a state would be thrown off its orbit.
|Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/10/12 at 04:11 PM|
I love the concept of the sound of silence. I also like the yang/yang (Good/bad) Another great write!
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/21/12 at 02:07 PM|
Clever use of reverse psychology George. There's a lesson for all of us here.
|Posted by Laura Doom on 06/09/12 at 08:01 PM|
The 'good life' as petty theft, the question to that plethora of answers;
theme is your calling George...