Otherlife by Alison McKenzieAlternate reality,
Manifestation of impossibilities,
Absolute seduction
Of my finest dreams -
No comparison shall ever
Speak the names
Of yesterday’s
Treacherous path;
Oh, I shall not.
That today’s brilliant fibers
Should shine luminous
Under a storm-ridden Sun;
That on present whispers
Should flow such swollen rivers
Robust of adoration,
Devotion and love;
Whose fingers in my hair
Should find the silk of
A woman felled by love,
A woman transported
From fated winter ice
To the favor of youth
In a new spring.
These are the markers
Of a turned world,
A million de ja vu’s
In the early melt
Of a long frozen vein.
01/28/2012
Author's Note: This is how it feels to discover myself in an "otherlife", so far far far from where I thought I'd be on January 28, 2012. It is an amazing journey, and I've been blessed with a partner who is so kind, so full of joy and laughter. How "we" came to be is still a sweet and astonishing mystery.
Posted on 01/28/2012 Copyright © 2024 Alison McKenzie
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by George Hoerner on 01/28/12 at 01:29 PM Congratulations lady, how I hope beyond hope that this lasts for as long as you need it. |
Posted by Mo Couts on 01/28/12 at 06:02 PM Congratulations, Ali girl. I swear that I can see your glow and feel it's warmth ALL the way over here! |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/28/12 at 10:58 PM ... outstanding..... |
Posted by Shannon McEwen on 01/29/12 at 02:54 AM very beautiful Alison, it's a wonderful thing to have someone who loves you, a partner, |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/31/12 at 01:15 AM Very Shakespearean, Alison...great intensity! |
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/08/12 at 02:39 PM I love this, I love the line about comparing yesterday's treacherous past, and how you became alive in the end...I wish I had more intelligent things to say lol but this is really good, and worthy of potd, any day |
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