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A new ending

by Prateek Segal

The sun has set
and it is a new ending.
I will dream again
Yes I will dream
because it is a new ending.
And I will relive
this day
not as it was
but as what it would have been
had I dreamt it
on the last ending.

01/12/2012

Posted on 01/14/2012
Copyright © 2026 Prateek Segal

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jody Pratt on 01/15/12 at 08:30 AM

Great flow and organized chaos in this one. :)

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/13/14 at 07:55 PM

I really like the looped feeling this gives me. Congrats on POTD!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/13/14 at 11:27 PM

I agree with the first two comments. A short but decisive slice of introspection, that employs key elements of humanity (sun, new ending, dream) quite effectively in delivering the message. Excellent spiritual poem also.

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