| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/21/11 at 12:15 PM ... excellent..... |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 12/21/11 at 12:48 PM Exceptionally nice write lady. Very well done. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/21/12 at 04:23 PM I found this a while back and placed it in my bookmarks when I was offline. I'm glad I was logged in today to put in in my favorites, because I relate with this. And send you a friend's solid hug. Heart-wrenching poem and so real, so real. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/22/12 at 05:50 PM Sounds just like where I live too, both geographically and in the mind. Excellent empathy piece! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/25/12 at 03:55 PM This is such a compelling read. "overcome by rules and laws." - my favorite line.
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| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/27/12 at 02:59 PM Clara- a powerful write. I relate to this one so well. One of your best! |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 02/27/12 at 05:11 PM a very powerful write! |
| Posted by James Zealy on 03/04/12 at 05:58 PM Excellent and powerfull |
