there no end to your ingenuit ? by Laura Doom
On the occasion of my maiden voyage
through the aesthetic straits,
I was advised that 'a successful poem
does not end with the last line'.
Being well-versed in the literal
I took this statement at face value
and reciprocated its inscrutable smile
for want of a knowing eye.
Following the flawed logic of my original
transliteration, I proposed that an effective
line does not necessarily require a finite
and that even individual words are not
to the constraints of completio .
Several years of vanity lapsed before my
poetry was
read by, an unprimed li(ter)ar/y criti
andimpugned 4 its EnIGMAtic
a t t r i b u t e s &
Upon revisiting my erstwhile muse, I discovered
her legend foundering, her fortune lost
and her craft capsized in a mighty storm
of snot and dribble.
I re-evaluated my technique;—decided
to concentrateoverstyle
rainbow as arbitrary
abuse in flavour of substance. matters knot
Despite this, I have come to the
that some habits are incredibl
12/04/2011 Author's Note: [ o p tions were tention armed
d ing he r ing f his pie o it]
Posted on 12/04/2011 Copyright © 2024 Laura Doom
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by George Hoerner on 12/04/11 at 02:00 PM i lov it ldy - jst wndrfl!! |
Posted by Jim Benz on 12/04/11 at 04:17 PM there's definately more here than meets the e e |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/04/11 at 09:52 PM hahahahahahahahahaha - sorry, i m over me with uth and illiness. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/04/11 at 09:53 PM my previous comment did not translate in the manner intended. Insert spaces and any letters you deem suitable. ;) |
Posted by Lori Blair on 12/05/11 at 12:28 AM what a strong play with words and insights..I guess there is no one powerful ending to express all wish from the beginning to end! Brilliant!! |
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