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by Laura Doom


On the occasion of my maiden voyage
through the aesthetic straits,
I was advised that 'a successful poem
does not end with the last line'.

Being well-versed in the literal
I took this statement at face value
and reciprocated its inscrutable smile
for want of a knowing eye.

Following the flawed logic of my original
transliteration, I proposed that an effective
line does not necessarily require a finite 
and that even individual words are not 
to the constraints of completio  .

Several years of vanity lapsed before my
    poetry was
read by, an unprimed li(ter)ar/y criti
 andimpugned 4 its EnIGMAtic
a t t r i b u  t   e    s     & 

Upon revisiting my erstwhile muse, I discovered
her legend foundering, her fortune lost
and her craft capsized in a mighty storm
of snot and dribble.

I re-evaluated my technique;—decided
to concentrateoverstyle
rainbow as arbitrary
abuse in flavour of substance. matters knot

Despite this, I have come to the 
that some habits are incredibl

12/04/2011

Author's Note: [ o   p   tions were   tention      armed d  ing  he  r  ing  f  his pie   o    it]

Posted on 12/04/2011
Copyright © 2024 Laura Doom

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 12/04/11 at 02:00 PM

i lov it ldy - jst wndrfl!!

Posted by Jim Benz on 12/04/11 at 04:17 PM

there's definately more here than meets the e e

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/04/11 at 09:52 PM

hahahahahahahahahaha - sorry, i m over me with uth and illiness.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/04/11 at 09:53 PM

my previous comment did not translate in the manner intended. Insert spaces and any letters you deem suitable. ;)

Posted by Lori Blair on 12/05/11 at 12:28 AM

what a strong play with words and insights..I guess there is no one powerful ending to express all wish from the beginning to end! Brilliant!!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/05/11 at 03:52 AM

A desperate, strange and rather glorious adventure.

Posted by Shannon McEwen on 12/06/11 at 04:26 AM

hahaha, love this!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/25/11 at 01:45 PM

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Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/25/11 at 01:49 PM

quaffquaffthatsacredinkthatflowsthroughyoulauradoom

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