a bird flies by

by Jim Benz

drinking wine
as I sit on the rug
a bird flies by


Author's Note: Norwegian wood

Posted on 12/01/2011
Copyright © 2020 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/01/11 at 04:19 PM

Nice imagery.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/01/11 at 04:35 PM

OK, now you have challenged me. Writing haiku is such a gift - somewhat elusive to me most of the time. I have a poet friend who is really good at it - just like you. Thanks.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/03/11 at 01:37 PM

Drinking wine is nice on its own, as is a bird flying by, but combine the two, and it's a whole new experience. Good capture Jim.

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