a bird flies by by Jim Benz
drinking wine
as I sit on the rug
a bird flies by
12/01/2011 Author's Note: Norwegian wood
Posted on 12/01/2011 Copyright © 2024 Jim Benz
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/01/11 at 04:19 PM Nice imagery. |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/01/11 at 04:35 PM OK, now you have challenged me. Writing haiku is such a gift - somewhat elusive to me most of the time. I have a poet friend who is really good at it - just like you. Thanks. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/03/11 at 01:37 PM Drinking wine is nice on its own, as is a bird flying by, but combine the two, and it's a whole new experience. Good capture Jim. |
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