| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 11/26/11 at 08:25 PM Nice, I like it. :) I especially like the fact that you reminded me of rain on a rooftops. That is one of my favorite sounds in the world. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/27/11 at 04:08 AM "soft hoof beats" is a great 'visual'
auditory for rain on the roof. I like the idea of two voices here, and especially that "deep cellar within." |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/27/11 at 04:08 AM sorry, "empty cellar". ;) |
| Posted by Don Matley on 11/27/11 at 09:15 PM Excellent work. Your rain conjures up the cozy innocence of youth and the less comfortable times recognized in maturity. Very vivid, very thoughtful, very enjoyable. I loved the setting or the scene also. |
| Posted by Lori Blair on 11/28/11 at 02:54 AM Considering that all it has been doing here..rain..but then what is sunshine without the rain? certainly not as welcomed..great write. You described it so well, the emotions are stirring or is that thunder? |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/19/11 at 04:26 PM Thoughtful reflection on a common occurrence. Apt symbolism. Rain can be cleansing and cooling as well as soaking and depressing! |
