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When will it be done?

by Shannon McEwen

The list sits expectantly
Somewhere between
Wishes and dreams

Demanding attention
Throwing a tantrum
Until the only possible choice

Is to heed its billboard
Scribbled in red crayon
That the end is never coming

Hope haemorrhages
From cracked nails
As one item is erased

Another four jump on
Join the protest
Unwashed and unrepentant

Yet another thing to do
Before the wishes
And the dreams

That patiently linger
Knowing deep down
It’s a fruitless vigil

11/06/2011

Posted on 11/06/2011
Copyright © 2026 Shannon McEwen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/12/11 at 04:55 PM

Yeah, I know the feeling. I like you poetic expression of this phenomenon. I especially like the lines about the wishes and dreams patiently lingering. Very well said. Thanks a bunch, Shannon.

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