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My New Apartment
by Susan Q TomasThe smell of fabric softener
Everyone says “Hello” or “Buenas Dias”
Bicycles on the patios
I like my new place
10/23/2011 Author's Note: About week 2 in my new apartment
Posted on 10/23/2011
Copyright © 2024 Susan Q Tomas
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/23/11 at 08:04 PM Sounds pretty good. Nice bit. |
| Posted by Shannon McEwen on 10/24/11 at 03:35 AM not many words that have a nice impact. |
| Posted by Leslye Writer on 11/01/11 at 09:55 AM
I think I like your new place too. This poem makes me smile. Thank you for that delightful and spare peek. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/02/15 at 06:37 PM The title is very unique. I like the simple, familiar bits in this that imply you've found a new home. Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/13/15 at 05:32 PM Warm positive message here Susan...I like! |
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