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Fey: PreDawn

by Alison McKenzie

A gifted moment
Flutters toward, on the wings
Of a late season creature.
Together we sample over-ripe berries
Until inebriation tickles.

The blessing received,
It is not fate.

Obedient eyes close
On the edge of every sunset,
Where baffled dreams
Fill neurons with questions.

Am I the vacuum of
Space between the atoms,
Foreign in a speechless realm
Without definition?

Or am I the particles themselves,
Bouncing on eternity’s byways,
Creating friction and heat
In sub-zero zones?

Hungry, every encountered surface is probed,
Data deluge at every receptor,
Senses engaged to full capacity -
Alas, without answers.

And so the heart eventually slows;
Paces itself against destinations’ temptations,
Collapse of the translucent form sought
On the sands of
Any unrecognized ocean.

10/17/2011

Posted on 10/17/2011
Copyright © 2024 Alison McKenzie

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/18/11 at 12:09 AM

Wow! An incredible piece of poetry. Eclectic vocabulary, mood setting, like a fine wine, as eluded to in the poem. To me, overall, this represents a game changer for you.

Posted by Adam Dyson on 10/18/11 at 08:29 AM

Beautiful and uplifting

Posted by Laura Doom on 10/18/11 at 10:04 AM

Fascinating interplay between the cognitive and the affective by metaphysical shift from dusk to dawn.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/18/11 at 01:53 PM

... brilliant.....

Posted by Sal Haefling on 10/18/11 at 10:22 PM

Oh my! Love the way this flows! So epic.

Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 10/19/11 at 07:00 AM

Lovely! Namaste sister! MFS

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 10/20/11 at 12:18 PM

I must say your recent journey has taken you to poetic Everests, Alison...this is yet another triumph of language and emotion

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/20/11 at 03:21 PM

Glad to see this hit No. 1. Well deserved!

Posted by Shannon McEwen on 10/21/11 at 04:08 AM

I agree this is beautiful.

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