| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Shannon McEwen on 10/15/11 at 01:23 PM I love this Alison! |
| Posted by Quinn Vokes on 10/16/11 at 12:35 AM Beautiful, Alison. I am mesmerized :) |
| Posted by Keith D Allison on 10/16/11 at 12:50 AM Stardust among the flowers, |
| Posted by Shonda Creemer on 10/16/11 at 05:24 AM So delicate! It danced upon my tongue. I adore this. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/16/11 at 05:13 PM ...ali, this is transitory, sending wave with your words...so normal for you to write a laced-wreath of words into an emotional watershed. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 10/16/11 at 06:00 PM I couldn't begin to create a piece this empyreal -- a reciprocal complement of compliments :> |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/16/11 at 06:07 PM There is a sense of profound renewal in this remarkable piece. |
| Posted by Lori Blair on 10/17/11 at 05:12 AM How I loved this write as well as that final line..we do have a path we follow regardless of how many times we lose our way..Brilliant write! |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 10/17/11 at 12:49 PM Elegant and sensuous lyricism and beautiful rhyme...capped off by that killer last stanza. Bravo, Alison! |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 10/17/11 at 09:20 PM I love the octet meter to this!! Nice to come back and read one of your poems Al-i-son! |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 10/25/11 at 05:15 PM most edifying and pure, everything about this |
| Posted by Colleen Sperry on 10/28/11 at 06:24 PM so enjoyed reading this! |
