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I'm pointing at you

by Glenn Currier

I'm pointing at you!

You there standing in the shadow
of that big mistake
you the quarterback who just threw
your third interception
or the father kicking yourself
for being so nasty to your son
who just dropped the milk.

You fill in the blank.

Where did you learn
to love being stuck in the mud
of your every mistake
so rutted
you get a perverse pleasure
in that brown vapor
unable to draw a full breath?

You fill in the blank.

Maybe you need to go back
to kindergarten
where learning is fun
and each goof brings a giggle
a flag waving or a friend saying
here's something else
to learn.

You fill in the blank.

Can you leave those clotted boots in the mud
nod at your flub
step out looking around
for the next chance
to try something new
to be kind to those who err
especially you?

I'm pointing at me.

10/09/2011

Posted on 10/09/2011
Copyright © 2025 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Paul Lastovica on 10/09/11 at 02:07 PM

In life and in work i deal with human error - i've got a friend who constantly provides good examples of what not to do; and at work it's my job to hunt down errors in inventory, track them back to their originator. I've certainly learned to have a laugh when I make my own mistakes - to shurg off the humiliation, keep the lesson. Well done, friend :)

Posted by Shannon McEwen on 10/09/11 at 03:41 PM

I think at one time or another everyone would be the "I'm pointing at you" which is what I really like about this.

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 10/09/11 at 04:33 PM

Hey Glenn. This one is going into my favorites. Very "in your face" and never loses its beat.

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