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Aquatic Togetherness
by James Blaylock
Aquatic Togetherness
come, let's clasp hands,
then running headlong
into a ripe and frothy
waterworld
we'll never let loose
one another with such
depths rising upward
underneath
but instead we're going
to disappear together -
embracing this wonder
saturated
6-11-11
james kenneth blaylock
06/12/2011
Posted on 06/12/2011
Copyright © 2026 James Blaylock
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 06/13/11 at 04:54 PM ...james, this one needs hammered-up on the wall; visceral, distant in closeness-only in that it is a wonderful fantasy, and yet such a dream and such a way of dressing the itness. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 06/13/11 at 04:56 PM ...james, i forgot to express my awe at your pome; i loved it and yet didn't say so. good work. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/28/11 at 12:43 PM It is incredible what we can do together, isn't it. I love the gentle hope in this, James. Thanks for a beautiful poem. |
| Posted by Leonard M Hawkes on 12/19/14 at 05:12 AM I like this one--if I didn't know about hot tubs, I'd think you'd been to Indian Hot Springs! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/19/14 at 06:07 PM I really enjoyed the whole visual I get from reading this and love that last word especially. Congrats on POTD! |
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