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precious

by Morgan D Hafele

he asked,
"what makes life so
precious?"

her response,
"well
if you take it
do you know how to
give it back?"

05/26/2011

Author's Note: something i've been thinking about for a long time now

Posted on 05/26/2011
Copyright © 2026 Morgan D Hafele

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 05/27/11 at 11:05 AM

...morgan, is that a trick question?...anyway, i love it. and cool thought behind it.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/22/11 at 01:26 AM

Interesting brain twister, thought provoker. I like the paradox at work here.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/28/11 at 03:24 PM

You put it so well and powerfully, without complexity. Good thinking - well done.

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