Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/02/11 at 09:41 PM A lot of really interesting visuals at play here. This is great storytelling. |
Posted by Ava Blu on 05/03/11 at 10:38 PM Very strange imagery, things I wouldn't have put together yet they work. Welcome back to pathetic. |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 05/06/11 at 01:39 AM ... excellent...welcome to Pathetic..... |
Posted by Kristine Briese on 05/06/11 at 10:45 PM I like the three distinct sets of imagery, all of them pleasant. Welcome. |
Posted by Paganini Jones on 05/18/11 at 05:14 PM I love love love this. An immediate fave. |
Posted by George Hoerner on 10/16/11 at 02:02 PM With a poem like this you are certainly a welcome member. This piece deserves POTD as it is today. Great write! |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/16/11 at 06:02 PM Familiar cliches and rituals used in a most unique manner. I really love the "pet apple" stanza. Congrats on POTD. |
Posted by Jody Pratt on 12/27/11 at 06:00 AM Unique and promising poetry. I look forward to seeing more of your personality. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/29/16 at 07:55 PM Finely crafted piece of writing, Mark. |