|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/02/11 at 09:41 PM|
A lot of really interesting visuals at play here. This is great storytelling.
|Posted by Ava Blu on 05/03/11 at 10:38 PM|
Very strange imagery, things I wouldn't have put together yet they work. Welcome back to pathetic.
|Posted by Joe Cramer on 05/06/11 at 01:39 AM|
... excellent...welcome to Pathetic.....
|Posted by Kristine Briese on 05/06/11 at 10:45 PM|
I like the three distinct sets of imagery, all of them pleasant. Welcome.
|Posted by Paganini Jones on 05/18/11 at 05:14 PM|
I love love love this. An immediate fave.
|Posted by George Hoerner on 10/16/11 at 02:02 PM|
With a poem like this you are certainly a welcome member. This piece deserves POTD as it is today. Great write!
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/16/11 at 06:02 PM|
Familiar cliches and rituals used in a most unique manner. I really love the "pet apple" stanza. Congrats on POTD.
|Posted by Jody Pratt on 12/27/11 at 06:00 AM|
Unique and promising poetry. I look forward to seeing more of your personality.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/29/16 at 07:55 PM|
Finely crafted piece of writing, Mark.