| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 04/15/11 at 05:25 PM This is lovely - welcome to Pathetic :) |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 04/16/11 at 11:58 PM Perhaps I am mispronouncing something, but the line "and gray hillock" only seems to have 4 syllables which does not make it a haiku. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 04/17/11 at 12:23 AM heh There we go! The first haiku is my favorite. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/17/11 at 02:16 PM Very nice. Definitely has that outdoorsy feel to it/them. |
| Posted by James Blaylock on 04/18/11 at 07:19 AM I can't claim to know how to write in the style of Haiku, as I've never written any, but I still enjoy them sooo much. I seemed to enjoy the first one/part the best of all. :) |
| Posted by Angela Cotterman on 09/14/11 at 11:51 AM And here, another voice is added to the echoes across the moors. |
| Posted by Shannon McEwen on 12/02/11 at 02:30 PM this is gorgeous, love it. |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 12/02/11 at 07:49 PM I can't remember the last time I saw haiku in a POTD. And I enjoyed them. Thanks Alli. |
