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Waves

by Kristina Woodhill

Nisshoki
Red sun weeps on white
Hands cross seas

03/14/2011

Posted on 03/14/2011
Copyright © 2025 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/14/11 at 10:19 PM

...humfelt words so well said.

Posted by E. A. Pugh on 03/14/11 at 10:22 PM

love it.

Posted by George Hoerner on 03/15/11 at 01:47 AM

Very nice m'lady! Very nice.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/15/11 at 02:11 AM

thank you for this, Kristina

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 03/15/11 at 05:25 AM

It doesn't need too many words, does it? Thank you Kristina.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/22/11 at 09:19 PM

Few words but so very effective in portraying empathy for those suffering such a catastrophe.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/22/11 at 12:54 PM

when the serenity of these three lines whipped into view it put the balm to the storm of the eye within the eye.

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