Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 03/07/11 at 02:52 AM That may be true but it is still a long journey. At least the light at the end of the tunnel can guide us. Thanks for sharing. |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/08/11 at 07:14 PM I like the way you take us from the infernal to the eternal now in this soft sad piece. There is a sadness but also the brightness of hope and belief. Thanks Tony. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/08/11 at 11:47 PM I like how that last stanza straddles the threshold. |
Posted by James Zealy on 03/09/11 at 05:44 PM Tony, when is death really dieing? beautiful write |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/12/11 at 11:55 PM The hope of Eternal Life underscores this hopefilled poem. |
Posted by Sam Richmond on 05/05/11 at 11:10 AM Dear Tony; It's as if you could actually see the scenes as you wrote them. I know you've shown them quite vividly to me. Unassuming, unambiguous, just good clean poetry. Great reading. Sam |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/27/13 at 10:53 PM Nice to see this as POTD, Tony! |
Posted by Steve Michaels on 12/28/13 at 03:23 AM Congrats on POTD - love the way the piece just carries me through! |