|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Max Bouillet on 03/07/11 at 02:52 AM|
That may be true but it is still a long journey. At least the light at the end of the tunnel can guide us. Thanks for sharing.
|Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/08/11 at 07:14 PM|
I like the way you take us from the infernal to the eternal now in this soft sad piece. There is a sadness but also the brightness of hope and belief. Thanks Tony.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/08/11 at 11:47 PM|
I like how that last stanza straddles the threshold.
|Posted by James Zealy on 03/09/11 at 05:44 PM|
Tony, when is death really dieing? beautiful write
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/12/11 at 11:55 PM|
The hope of Eternal Life underscores this hopefilled poem.
|Posted by Sam Richmond on 05/05/11 at 11:10 AM|
Dear Tony; It's as if you could actually see the scenes as you wrote them. I know you've shown them quite vividly to me. Unassuming, unambiguous, just good clean poetry. Great reading. Sam
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/27/13 at 10:53 PM|
Nice to see this as POTD, Tony!
|Posted by Steve Michaels on 12/28/13 at 03:23 AM|
Congrats on POTD - love the way the piece just carries me through!