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Across Forever

by Tony Whitaker

Heaven’s fields unfold
to a spirit-filled splendor
Your life has left
but a new one enters

And there she stands
holding out her hands
to the one she loved
from the wings of a dove

He’s come home to you
Now it’s called forever
But just a moment ago
He thought it was never

02/11/2011

Posted on 02/11/2011
Copyright © 2021 Tony Whitaker

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 03/07/11 at 02:52 AM

That may be true but it is still a long journey. At least the light at the end of the tunnel can guide us. Thanks for sharing.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/08/11 at 07:14 PM

I like the way you take us from the infernal to the eternal now in this soft sad piece. There is a sadness but also the brightness of hope and belief. Thanks Tony.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/08/11 at 11:47 PM

I like how that last stanza straddles the threshold.

Posted by James Zealy on 03/09/11 at 05:44 PM

Tony, when is death really dieing? beautiful write

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/12/11 at 11:55 PM

The hope of Eternal Life underscores this hopefilled poem.

Posted by Sam Richmond on 05/05/11 at 11:10 AM

Dear Tony; It's as if you could actually see the scenes as you wrote them. I know you've shown them quite vividly to me. Unassuming, unambiguous, just good clean poetry. Great reading. Sam

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/27/13 at 10:53 PM

Nice to see this as POTD, Tony!

Posted by Steve Michaels on 12/28/13 at 03:23 AM

Congrats on POTD - love the way the piece just carries me through!

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