| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/01/11 at 10:42 PM Been there, wrote that, wanted to bite my tongue afterwards..and then, many moons later, I re-read the "offending" piece and realized how right on I'd be in the first place. Write on, Joan. you got a right to say it! |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/01/11 at 10:56 PM ...keen & heavy. great write. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/02/11 at 12:13 AM Ooooh, most excellent last stanza, Joan. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 02/03/11 at 06:35 PM Well expressed,Joan, but I suppose one can always delete what they write? But not really, right?
(and I am doing ok) :) |
| Posted by Johnny Crimson on 02/04/11 at 07:02 PM The thing that amazes me is there is this perception that we are exactly the character we've created online and that couldn't be farther from the truth in my case (most cases). It doesn't matter what we say or don't say here, it's a ficticious place the internet, in my eyes it's not real, it doesn't breate, our writing might pulse and beat but our conversations to eachother and on the beloved "forum" don't matter. So more power to ya for facing up to your wrting on there, but I'm here to tell ya that anyone that takes anything on here seriously needs a job or spouse to stress them out. :) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/09/11 at 12:30 AM Words of wisdom well spoken, especially that closing stanza. Kudos Joan. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/09/11 at 03:13 AM ...congratulations, girl! #1. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 02/14/11 at 09:08 AM i like this a lot. very powerful and simple. and like johnny said, if someone takes what they read here (the internet) they need something real in their life. :p |
