| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/14/11 at 07:01 PM You and your pigeons. Heh. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 01/14/11 at 08:16 PM Ilove poems that involve you and your grandkid.Another wonderful write |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 01/14/11 at 08:33 PM the vision and the wisdom of youth, before it's too smart for it's own good. hahaha. great write! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/14/11 at 09:28 PM Strong image indeed. Captured so well, too. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/14/11 at 09:42 PM Oh yes, and innocence is such a beautiful thing but only in a few does it seem to last forever. Great write Charlie. |
| Posted by E. A. Pugh on 01/15/11 at 05:08 AM Love the forth stanza |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/15/11 at 05:13 AM Thank you for sharing this child with me. Precious. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 01/15/11 at 07:04 PM PS[ IF YOU FIND G-d, send HER here |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/16/11 at 09:01 AM Brillinat Charlie. It makes me feel like sitting by a fire on a cold winter's day with a cup of hot cocoa in one hand and a book in the other! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/18/11 at 01:04 AM Amen brotha Charles. A delight to read. Wonderful candy for the mind here...in its rich imagery throughout. Adds to favorites. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 01/19/11 at 10:33 AM Yes,I am turtle slow...but I want you to know...
I loved every word. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 01/24/11 at 01:36 PM Good thing for all of us that God's the best creator/engineer and engineers every opportunity we meet to "find" Him. Some of my most memorable occasions have been with my grandchildren, too. Beautifully written (and lived!). |
