|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 01/08/11 at 01:24 PM|
Well, I love this. Nice.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/10/11 at 05:26 PM|
Thought provoking. I especially like the ring and impact of the last line.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/11/11 at 06:12 PM|
I love the understated use of the word "occurrence"
in the title. Each line of this has immense weight. Deadly and chilling. Thanks, Tony.
|Posted by Scott Utley on 01/12/11 at 01:14 AM|
POW! Bang! Wazaam! Ms. Woodhill expresses it best for me when she says every line has immense weight. Distilled perfection.
|Posted by Lori Blair on 12/06/11 at 12:41 AM|
So strong! I can see the dead eyes..although I know they would go under shelter before we could and be safe...oh gosh! I feel it all unraveling..Excellent!
|Posted by A. Paige White on 08/15/12 at 07:13 PM|
And what if the occurence was an EMP high above the center of our nation from a nuclear detonation? You've quilled the blind men's cataracts with your poet's mind, my friend.