| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 01/08/11 at 01:24 PM Well, I love this. Nice. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/10/11 at 05:26 PM Thought provoking. I especially like the ring and impact of the last line. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/11/11 at 06:12 PM I love the understated use of the word "occurrence"
in the title. Each line of this has immense weight. Deadly and chilling. Thanks, Tony. |
| Posted by Scott Utley on 01/12/11 at 01:14 AM POW! Bang! Wazaam! Ms. Woodhill expresses it best for me when she says every line has immense weight. Distilled perfection. |
| Posted by Lori Blair on 12/06/11 at 12:41 AM So strong! I can see the dead eyes..although I know they would go under shelter before we could and be safe...oh gosh! I feel it all unraveling..Excellent! |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 08/15/12 at 07:13 PM And what if the occurence was an EMP high above the center of our nation from a nuclear detonation? You've quilled the blind men's cataracts with your poet's mind, my friend. |
